Immigratin(First draft)
Immigration seems to be making more headlines in recent years.As the world globalizes in terms of nations'economies ,trade and investment,borders are opened up more easily for flow of goods and products.People are supposedly freer to move around the world ,too.
But why do people emigrate?.People emigrate from one country to another for a variety of complex reasons. Some are forced to move ,due to conflict,while others may voluntarily emigrate.From another perspective ,immigration can also represent an act of courage.For example the hidden loneliness to be suffered is not always easy to overcome.Immigration can have positive and negative impacts on both the host country ,and the original country.
The host country is usually an industrialized country in Western Europe,or the United States.For these countries,immigrants offer various benefits such as the following:Immigrants will often do jobs that people in the host country will not ,or cannot do;migrant workers often work longer hours and for lower salaries.
As immigration became a global issue ,there are different opinions about it.There is an opinion sees that immigration provide youth with the opportunity to success.There is another opinion which is against immigration,they ask youth to try to find any job but in the homeland.Iam with the second opinion ,as i think it will be too difficult for immigrants to find a good job there.And if they found ,it will be with little money.
To sum up,immigration has been and always will be a controversial area of discussion .And the government should try to reduce it.
Your draft is good but you need to take care of the following:
ReplyDelete1. But why do people emigrate(wrong spelling)?.
2. with the opportunity to success (succeed)
3. Iam with the second opinion ,as i(capitalize)